This is beautiful. What a way to open up Narrowtives! Youve really nailed it on this one. I was impressed by how much Character you packed into 250 words. I usually skip characters and I always find myself wanting for more words!
Echoing Scoot - Captured perfectly Grandpa Eli's calm trust in the Creator and the skepticism (maybe ignorance) of Tuck. Loved it, Derek. I have a camping memory that stands out that I think I will give a shot at this.
This is beautiful. What a way to open up Narrowtives! Youve really nailed it on this one. I was impressed by how much Character you packed into 250 words. I usually skip characters and I always find myself wanting for more words!
Well done!
Truly appreciate that Scoot. I consider this the highest of compliments coming from the likes of you.
Echoing Scoot - Captured perfectly Grandpa Eli's calm trust in the Creator and the skepticism (maybe ignorance) of Tuck. Loved it, Derek. I have a camping memory that stands out that I think I will give a shot at this.
Can’t wait to see it Cork! Thank you for your kindness.
Beautifully described in rich character voice. Well done. I can hear the music.
Thank you!