Loved this, Derek. Great way to illustrate that passage in Mt. The only thing that confused me was that it took me a moment to realize that before and after the break were 2 separate days . So, don't know if that could have been clarified a little more right there.
Was unsure where you were taking us, Derek-that's good! Had been with family in Savannah several years back, so it was a nice recollection. Was engaging to read and dramatic ending in a short space! I'm likin!
Loved this, Derek. Great way to illustrate that passage in Mt. The only thing that confused me was that it took me a moment to realize that before and after the break were 2 separate days . So, don't know if that could have been clarified a little more right there.
Thanks for the feedback Cork! I wondered about that.
Powerful!
Was unsure where you were taking us, Derek-that's good! Had been with family in Savannah several years back, so it was a nice recollection. Was engaging to read and dramatic ending in a short space! I'm likin!
Thank you!
Surely!